Thoughts on Project 3

I keep thinking about my project 3, and I'm pretty sure my next rhetorical move will be to add more descriptive language. I feel as if I do not describe the place about which I am speaking clearly enough. I have talked enough about how the place makes me feel when I am there, but my audience does not have a good enough idea of what I am actually looking at while I am there; the audience is not able to imagine themselves there and try to understand fully what it must really feel like to be there.