The writer does not seem to be too influenced by the writing implement, if at all. Her response is one that I could imagine seeing written in pen or even typed. Perhaps if she were using a writing utensil with a smaller point, she would have written more, but she did not adopt a different voice. She seems to be neither less of more expressive, yet agrees that flexibility of voice leads to a flexibility of all things.
In my personal opinion, this writing is good. Crayons do not present the least space-consuming of writing utensils. She was able to provide her point, however, and opinion nice and concisely. I suppose she did adapt to the writing implement merely by knowing she would have less room to write and therefore created a response that would fit and be complete.
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